Thesis statements

All right, all.  Here are two thesis statements that your classmates sent in.  I was hoping to have 12 other ones.  Send them on to me, post haste, please.

1.  It is always enjoyable to interpret photographs, whether they are easy to understand or not, but I feel photos that portray the studium point of view are easier to relate to.

2.  Horses have been a fun and useful animal for many generations. Today lots of people look at horses as entertaining, like horse back riding, or horses racing, but we still don't use horses as we used to.  Back in the day, horses were used for transportation, farming, fighting, and many other things.  Machines took the place of horses, like cars and trucks.

Please take some time to read them and consider what might make them stronger theses.  Also, please comment with your thoughts.